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AudioVision
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2 NEW SONGS TODAY! I hope you listen!

Posted by AudioVision - March 29th, 2010


So today, I've released a classical score, "The Madman and the Toy Shop", and also, a voice acting piece, "Nature Hike". I hope you enjoy both of them, really! Someday I wanna make that damn song of the week player...


Comments

The voice acting thing was hilarious... up until I heard the voice of the wood nymph. Something about that voice took me out of the moment.

As for the madman and the Toy shop, I will have to have a better look at it when I have the time, but from what I can tell from my initial listening, it does need some work.
My initial suggestion is to replace the organ with another instrument, like maybe heavy strings or something. Also, you keep a steady rhythem throughout the piece, which is ok for a while, but then it gets old. You are going to have to change it up a little. I don't know if you change up the tempo or change the beat or something, but it can't be that consistant. And last, something sounds odd about the brass again. It may be a problem with your equipment, but it hinders things a bit. I'm sure if I check it later, I may probelm solve for you.

P.S. World below ours is still a wonderful song.